I asked chatgpt to rewrite it:
Leveraging a comprehensive understanding of luminary technologies and operational procedures, I successfully orchestrated the replacement of an incandescent illumination unit, thereby ensuring the unimpeded continuation of a well-lit environment conducive to productivity and safety. This process entailed the meticulous de-installation of the expired bulb, followed by the careful integration of a new luminary element, all while strictly adhering to established safety protocols, effectively demonstrating my prowess in problem-solving, attention to detail, and aptitude for equipment maintenance and upkeep.
incandescent illumination unit
don’t people mostly use LEDs these days?
He replaced the incandescent illumination unit, doesn’t say what he replaced it with…
bzzzt. “single-handedly” might be read as “not a team player”. talk about how you “led a team that performed the upgrade” instead, or if that’s not true, maybe you “worked with stakeholders” (i.e. you texted your roommate “i replaced the light btw”).
*minimal safety incidents
Fun fact, you can put anything on your resume if you lie