By me~
This is a large homebrew that has the primary goal of allowing you to play as actual true dragons in a DnD setting without being unfairly overpowered.
To accomplish this…
A) I’ve included some guidance on how to better balance high level content
B) I’ve designed eight dragon-only classes, which are equivalent in power to the existing bard and wizard classes.
C) I’ve re-introduced a simple mechanic that allows martial characters to function much more effectively in combat; Flat Damage Reduction.
D) I’ve playtested it and refined it constantly for months
Also it contains a few new feats and spells that are suitable for use by humanoid characters! Complete with my personal guarantee that all of this stuff is at least as well-balanced as basic 5th edition DnD.
This is such a good piece of homebrew, oh my God.
I’m only 1/4th way in and I’m loving it so far. I especially like the DM’s tips, insight about balance philosophy and reasoning behind certain choices, and the extensive changelog at the bottom of the document. Really helps me better understand how to look at the class and evaluate it.
The only point of detriment is that the format you chose, that of a Google docs that is, is really hostile for such long brews. I would recommend switching to homebrewery or GM Binder. You could turn those 100 pages into a 30-ish page document very easily, and it would be much more digestible for people to read.
(Btw, I remembered your username from that discussion about dragons, and I agreed with you back then. Despite their prominence in fantasy imagery, they are really underutilized as character companions or as a playable race. I’m glad to see your passion for the topic translated into this!)
Ah! This is really helpful criticism/feedback, thank you so much. I haven’t used those sites before, but I would be happy to give them a shot because I know that this is a very large homebrew that can take a lot of effort to process.
And I’m so glad to hear that you like my creation! Stuff like that really makes the effort worth it
And… DONE
https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/liOJvZSBDaur
Thanks a lot for undertaking the effort of translating the entire class into homebrewery! It’s a lot of work, but it really helps making the class more readable. I also love how you used notes/descriptive text to distinguish between the “actual” text from your opinions/guidance.
I think it needs a bit more clean-up, but it’s a solid base to start from. A few nitpicks:
The following are suggestions and personal opinions: they should be treated as such and can be discarded if you don’t agree with them, no offence taken.
For example, THIS is what I came up with, although you could certainly improve on the design or alter it to your liking. I added the archetype and the colour to the heading, alongside the character’s name, because it allows the reader to immediately discern the most important aspect of the character. I’m not sure if you’re done with the chapter or if you plan on working on it still, but in case, I’d suggest adding additional info such as AC, HP and Speed to make it possible for the player to pick the character and immediately run with it.