This limerick has to be forced to have a decent flow. Who emphasizes the first syllable in “assured”? Lines 3 and/or 4 would probably flow better with an extra syllable, but are otherwise ok and have consistent feet.
Final verdict: 5/10, needs work
Also, the little logo at the bottom is trying way too hard
This limerick has to be forced to have a decent flow. Who emphasizes the first syllable in “assured”? Lines 3 and/or 4 would probably flow better with an extra syllable, but are otherwise ok and have consistent feet.
Final verdict: 5/10, needs work
Also, the little logo at the bottom is trying way too hard