• tormeh
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    1 day ago

    I don’t understand why people write like this. They’ve made their point in the first 3 paragraphs, and then it just goes on and on.

    • KobaCumTribute [she/her]@hexbear.net
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      I think it needed better editing or organization. I just started skimming after the first page worth of text and there were some good points here and there, but it just meandered way too much. It needed to be pared down and condensed into the key points, cutting all the redundant bits and rambling.