• Jax@sh.itjust.works
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    2 months ago

    Good lord trying to read this was hard. Also downvoted, Jesus Christ - clean up your writing.

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      2 months ago

      clean up your writing.

      sorry if i missspell words of have bad grammatics, english is not my native language and just “reading” what exists in the internet does not help either… would you please help me what you meant by “clean up” exactly so i can improve?

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        2 months ago

        For example

        weirdocrappydictatorlike

        Is probably better structured as

        weirdo-crappy-dictatoresque

        That being said, my biggest problem with what you wrote is that I have no idea what you’re trying to say. I could make my best guess, but I’d almost certainly be wrong. It’s hard to edit a message that you don’t really understand the meaning of/ motivation behind.

        Edit: also, ‘decisions’ and ‘arbitration’