In a world where emotions can be physically transferred from one person to another, a black-market dealer discovers a secret emotion that has the power to change the course of humanity.

  • writerman@kbin.socialOP
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    1 year ago

    Man. This is really good. Definitely reads like a first draft, but I’m not gonna critique you for that. The concept is great and the execution is almost there. This was a good read and a good idea. Thanks.

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      1 year ago

      Thank you for the kind words! It’s true that editing is the better form of writing lol, next time I’ll remember that before posting. I’m glad you enjoyed it!