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Chapotraphouse@hexbear.netEnglish · 9 months ago

[MAN 2]: Heh, sometimes that’s just the way the cookie crumbles amigo…

MAN 2 cocks gun, smokes entire cigarette

[MAN 2]: and sometimes the cookie crumbles you… …

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