• CyberEgg
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    3 days ago

    What else description would you find more fitting for a sixteen year old who is still in school? Do you want to imply other characteristics of her were more important or that she is not a schoolgirl at all?
    I don’t get what you are trying to say.

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      I don’t get why she is called schoolgirl given that the story has little to do with school, as far as I understand it

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        3 days ago

        Did you miss the paragraph about how this risks her graduation?

        And again, what do you think is this “framing” supposed to accomplish? What are we meant to overlook etc?