this is going viral online for being unhinged, although it has its fans. the author’s parents are rich gusano pro lifers, and her mom was appointed to the state board of education by desantis
this is going viral online for being unhinged, although it has its fans. the author’s parents are rich gusano pro lifers, and her mom was appointed to the state board of education by desantis
I had to give up halfway through this because of how painfully bad the writing is. The most shocking part of the text is that whoever wrote this claims to have an English degree.
I feel like the trainwreck of the opening sentence just captures the vibe
Beyond how God awful the structure and pacing are, what is this content? It takes her like a hundred words and almost as many commas to say ‘I won the lottery when I met my partner’.
Good writing - is when punctuation; the more punctuation, the gooder writing it is.
a bunch of people on Tictok are praising the prose, and saying that shes wrong but is a great writer. i felt like I was losing it and had to post here.
lmao those people have shit taste
Are they 13 years old or something? It’s written worse than verbose reddit comments, and that’s saying something
some of them were indeed adults, you cant tell from most accounts though.
Begging these people to read an actual book by a good author. Even books written for kids and teenagers are 100x better than this article.
You made it halfway congrats. I got like 6 sentences
https://www.graziechristie.com/
they’ve got a whole series of pointless, misogynistic articles, and are even the editor of a magazine (I presume the started it)
grazie, you’re a piece of shit